lundi 16 octobre 2017

CORRECTION DS FRANKENSTEIN



An antihero is a fictional character who lacks conventional heroic qualities. He is a mix between a hero and a villain. He is a usually deeply flawed bad extremely complex person who may have noble intentions but uses violence and other questionable methods to achieve his goal.
The “monster” created by Victor Frankensein (a scientist) in the novel written by Mary Shelley (1818) may be considered as an anti-hero for several reasons:
First, as the picture at the top indicates, his goal is to be accepted by others, to fit in, to become a member of human society and to be loved. Even though he looks scary because his face is full of scars, he is nevertheless a kind, gentle, sensitive person. The little girl in the second picture is not afraid of him; she is unprejudiced unlike the adults who reject the creature because of his horrible physical appearance. These personality traits show that like many other anti heroes, he has qualities which make him human.
On the other hand, he seems to have a split personality. He  gradually becomes more and more violent and doesn’t not hesitate to murder innocent people to reach his goal. Indeed, he wants to take revenge on his creator, Victor Frankenstein who abandoned him after giving life to him. For instance, we can see him carrying the dead body of a young woman who is in fact Victor’s fiancée. This ruthless killing turns him into a real monster.
Despite his redeeming qualities, he is also a villain. Consequently, he can be called an anti-hero but we can’t help feeling sorry for him.  
He reminds me of a modern-day antihero called Dexter who is a nice, shy, kind man working for the police in the day-time. However, at night, he turns into a  merciless serial killer whose goal is to get rid of those who have escaped justice. His actions are unethical (you must not take the law into your own hands) and yet we can’t help rooting for him.

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dimanche 15 octobre 2017

CORRECTION DS: DR JEKYLL AND MR HYDE

Image result for Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde 1931





An antihero is a fictional character who lacks conventional heroic qualities. He is a mix between a hero and a villain. He is a usually deeply flawed bad extremely complex person who may have noble intentions but uses violence and other questionable methods to achieve his goal.

Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde ,the main  character from RL Stevenson’s novel, fits this definition . On the film poster (from a film adaptation of the novel), he is wearing a suit and tie, a top hat, has a smooth face. At first sight, he looks both harmless and  handsome.  So on the one hand, he can be considered as  an upright member of society, a real gentleman. On the other hand, he can turn into a terrifying monster. At night, he gradually becomes uglier and uglier and more and more frightening. A drawing shows him wearing a blood-stained shirt, indicating that he has committed an evil deed, he may have murdered an innocent in cold blood. He is blood-thirsty and ruthless, plays by his own rules and seems to enjoy killing.

All these elements indicate that this character has a split personality, he has an evil twin, which makes him the epitome of the antihero. He reminds me of a modern-day antihero called Dexter who is a nice, shy, kind man working for the police in the day-time. However, at night, he turns into a  merciless serial killer whose goal is to get rid of those who have escaped justice. His actions are unethical (you must not take the law into your own hands) and yet we can’t help rooting for him.

All things considered, Dr Jekyll and his double, Mr Hyde, are the predecessors of today’s anti-heroes. Indeed, Dexter Morgan, Walter White and many others clearly have a lot in common with RL Stevenson’s character. (300 words)
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